viernes, 27 de septiembre de 2024

THE FLOWER GIRL - PART 5 (FINAL)



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------- Part 5 – LONG LIVE THE BRIDES (FINAL) -------

– Written by “Gale Kepler” and “Irene Naridza”

After the meal, the chairs in front of the altar were removed, leaving space for a dance floor. A man approached the music player, the same one used to play the wedding music, and changed the CD.

Music began to play, inviting the guests and the brides to take their partners to the dance floor. Soon, everyone was dancing, enjoying the moment. In the center were the two brides, who had taken off their heels to dance a bit, while their friends recorded the moment around them.

From a distance, Adelaida watched alongside Cecilia, who was happily filming with a borrowed camera. "Do you want to dance with me?" Domenica offered. "Sorry, I’m keeping Cecilia company, and besides, I don’t know how to dance." Adelaida excused herself.

"It doesn’t matter, I’m fine here, go on." Domenica grabbed her arm and led her along. "Just move like I do." she instructed as they began to mimic the movements of the other guests, holding hands. Cecilia made sure to capture them on camera too.

They danced for a while until Adelaida felt something: the urge to pee. "I have to go to the bathroom." she said, walking away. "Let’s go together." Domenica suggested. She asked an adult for the bathroom’s location and led her friend there.

A few steps outside the venue, there was a small white house with a sign on the front wall. "Bathrooms" To the left was a sign with a male silhouette and the word "Gentlemen." To the right, a female silhouette and the word "Ladies."

Adelaida walked uncomfortably toward the left. "Where are you going? Come on, here’s the girls' bathroom." Domenica said. "That’s why, you know I’m actually a boy." Adelaida whispered, feeling awkward about the situation. Domenica rolled her eyes. "Not now." She grabbed her cousin’s arm and dragged her inside the bathroom.

It wasn’t the first time Pedro had been in a girls' bathroom. When he was younger and only with his mother, she mother used to take him to the women’s bathroom because she didn’t want to leave him alone with older men who might have unknown intentions. That changed as he grew older.

But now, at this wedding event, the little feminized boy felt like he was doing something wrong. He went into one of the stalls and realized a problem: he couldn’t undo his dress no matter how hard he tried to reach the zipper nor the ribbon.

He came out and tried to ask his cousin for help. "Oh no, don’t take off the dress to pee." she said. "Just lift your skirt and use the toilet. And don’t forget, you need to sit. Oh, and remember to clean the seat before sitting." Adelaida thanked her for the instructions and went back into the stall. She followed her cousin’s advice.

Fortunately, the bathrooms weren’t too dirty. In fact, they were pretty clean and had air fresheners that made the time there more pleasant. It felt a bit strange to sit to pee, but Adelaida admitted it was actually a bit more comfortable that way.

Once she was done, she washed her hands and adjusted her dress before leaving. Both cousins returned to the dance floor and were met with a surprise. Romeo was on the stage where the altar had been. He was singing while his band played instruments, and the guests kept dancing.

"With just one kiss. I’m happy with her. I can fall in love, without words, Cupid will strike." he sang. The brides seemed to be enjoying the song a lot. "Romeo’s back!" Adelaida exclaimed. "He came with a flower crown to apologize for the interruption. He spoke with Mom Nadia and then got up to sing." Cecilia explained. "He has a nice voice." Adelaida agreed.

Romeo indeed had a lovely voice, but Adelaida noticed the bandage on his right hand, as if he had hurt it while hitting something, even noticing some red stains.

Adelaida and her family already knew Romeo, as he was a famous bachata singer, but seeing him there in this setting was curious and even surreal. After a few minutes, Adelaida asked him for a picture, which he happily obliged.

The dance continued for a while until the final event of the night was announced: the departure of the brides. "I guess we should say goodbye." said Cecilia. "Where are you going?" Adelaida asked. "To my moms' honeymoon. It’s a tradition for newlyweds to go on a honeymoon, kind of like a vacation. We’re going to 'DreamWish Landia,' the one in the United States." she explained excitedly.

Both Adelaida and Domenica hugged their friend. "I hope we can see each other again." Cecilia said. Adelaida felt a bit sad because she knew that wouldn’t be possible, no matter how much she wished it. "Yeah, hopefully, but I live far away." she replied, a bit embarrassed. "That doesn’t matter. If you try, we’ll definitely meet again." Domenica said, which made Adelaida reflect on her words.

"After this, there was no way ‘Adelaida’ could ever be seen again, right?" she asked herself.

A white car appeared outside the venue. It was time for the final goodbye. The guests lined up along the path to the car. The brides and their daughter passed by, with the flower girl pushing Cecilia’s wheelchair.

Everyone threw rice as they walked by. Some of the guests couldn’t hold back tears of joy once more. The three got into the car, a white convertible.

"Before I go, I want to thank you one last time." Lurdes began a speech. "For a long time, I felt confused. I knew what I felt, but I also knew that people didn’t understand. When I grew up, I faced a reality that told me, both directly and indirectly, that my heart was wrong and that I had to change. I really tried. I married someone who, at first, was kind and caring." her voice began to break.

"One day in June, while walking in the park, I met a sweet girl who had broken her heel. Since I was picking up my clothes from the dry cleaner, I offered her a pair of my flats. She gave me her address, where I could pick them later." She glanced at Nadia, smiling by her side.

"I told her that she could visit me later that day, and I would have her shoes washed." Nadia continued the story. "She arrived at the agreed time. I offered her coffee because her shoes were still drying. That day, we talked for hours. By the time we realized it was night, we said goodbye. But it wasn’t the last night we saw each other. The next day, we met again at the park for a chat, and it became our morning routine. We always jogged in the park, sharing a lot about ourselves. We got to know each other better and better." Nadia recounted, and everyone listened attentively.

"Then one day, after saying goodbye after a meeting, she gave me a kiss on the cheek, and I felt something different from all the other times I had said goodbye like that. I felt a warmth I had never felt before. The next day, when we said goodbye, instead of her kissing me on the cheek, I kissed her on the lips. For a moment, I thought I had made a mistake, but she just smiled. From that day on, we became even closer. We exchanged phone numbers and talked for hours at night. One day, during one of our usual meetings, I asked her, ‘What do you feel for me?’"

Nadia looked deeply into the eyes of the woman who was now her wife, remembering the moment she had asked the second most important question of her life. "For a second, I hesitated and said I only saw her as a friend. I didn’t want to lose her, but she just squeezed my hand and said those words I still remember: ‘I LOVE YOU.’" There was silence among the guests, only broken by some sobs, even from Romeo and his friends.

"That was the day I felt I could let go of a weight that had been on my shoulders for so long. It was like finding what I didn’t even know I needed. From that day on, we became lovers. We wanted to be together. We had finally found each other. But there was still one problem: I was already a married woman. I loved my husband. It was with him that I had my beloved daughter. But I realized the love I felt for him wasn’t the same as the love I felt for her. So, I did the right thing and ended things with him." Lurdes didn’t feel proud of how she had broken up with him, but she knew it was the right thing because she couldn’t give him the love he was looking for, nor could he give her the love she needed.

"When we started living together, I asked her the most important question of my life. I asked her, ‘Will you marry me?’ The answer, you all know it." The guests, especially Adelaida, applauded their inspirational story.

"Thank you all for being here, thank you for joining us in this special moment, but most importantly, thank you for accepting our love and understanding that there’s more than one way to do things." Lurdes spoke through tears. "Thank you for supporting us when we needed it the most." Nadia concluded. Those words touched the hearts of many.

Cecilia was holding her two mothers' hands when the car's engine finally started. They all waved goodbye to the car as it drove off.

“LONG LIVE THE BRIDES” Adelaida shouted, with feelings that came from her heart.

Now the Chabla family was leaving at the beginning of this new stage of their lives, ready to live life as they always wanted, loving each other without restrictions. Always having each other.

 

THE END

(Epilogue will be out at Wednesday, October 3)

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