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COLD DEALS - MOMMY'S GIRL - PART 4

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Written by: “Irene Naridza”

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I look out the bus window as we move through neighborhoods with large houses and lush trees lining the sidewalks. It’s another Saturday colder than usual. I’m using these days to run a small business; selling hot chocolate with bread.

I’m close to my stop. I stand up and move toward the exit at the back. I press the red button to signal the driver that I’m getting off. The bus brakes sharply, so I have to grip the bar tightly where the button is. "Thank you." I say as I step down onto the sidewalk. I enter the park while the bus continues its route.

It’s complicated. On one hand, pretending to be Nadia is embarrassing or at least it used to be. You could say I got used to the routine, and now it’s not so bad. The clothes aren’t my style at all, but they’re comfortable.

I reach a spot beside the park path. This is where I set up my small table and chair. I place the thermos, disposable cups, and bread on the table and hang up the sign: Hot Chocolate & Bread for 30 Maygels (75 cents). I bring 15 corn breads to match the thermos cups capacity, which usually holds up to 15 cups of hot chocolate. Last week, I made 450 Maygels from everything.

I need to earn some money to buy the latest issues of the Super Bolivar comic. They had it at the school library, but only a few issues. I’m dying to know how it all ends. I can’t wait to see how Bolivar gets his happy ending after liberating Ecuador from Spanish rule.

I’ve been doing this for three Saturdays in a row now. Mom gave me the idea, but she wanted me to sell in front of the house. Is she crazy? I know how people are, and I don’t want anyone—except her and her friends—to know about this. Mom always tells me I have to be smart, protect her and myself. This is one way to do it.

I see a couple of people pass by, but none even glance at me. At this time of the morning, I don’t always make sales, it’s 8:00 AM. But the temperature is pretty low. Not as much as up north, where it snows, but still really cold.

I’m wearing a gray padded jacket with a little bear embroidered on the front, a winter hat, a denim skirt, black tights, and gray sneakers with pink stripes. Mom insisted I try wearing tights and a skirt instead of black sweatpants.

When I did, she was happy. We even took a picture together. Ever since the first time she dressed me as a girl, she always takes a couple of pictures and puts them in a memory album. That’s another reason I don’t resist being ‘Nadia’ so much anymore; it’s nice to see her happy. It’s not so bad, as long as I stay away from idiots, of course.

"Give me a hot chocolate, girl." says a man in a white jacket, focused on a newspaper. I fill a white disposable cup with chocolate from the thermos and grab a cornbread with a napkin. I place them on the other side of the table, right in front of him.

"Here you go." He digs into his pocket and puts 30 Maygels in coins into my hand. He takes a big sip of the hot chocolate and sighs. "Delicious." He tucks the newspaper under his arm and walks away, taking a bite of the bread.

I can’t stop thinking about the front-page headline: OIL WORKERS’ SITUATION WORSENS. A week ago, four national oil tankers had an accident, spilling crude oil onto the beaches of the United States. I remember it well; I was leaving ballet class. I was chatting with Olga and Jane when a news bulletin interrupted Madame Melody’s soft music radio program. She covered her mouth with her hands in shock.

The cause was a mix of negligence, including the ships being too old or missing their scheduled unloading dates. Luckily, it didn’t turn into a disaster. Turns out, the Americans have good protocols for cleaning up oil spills. Everything is under control now.

The trouble started again when they tried to hold those responsible accountable, and Maglavir government was blamed. The state handles oil exports, and they were the ones who ignored certain details to save money.

The U.S. wanted Maglavir to pay for the oil cleanup and to improve the ships so business could continue. The president—some guy whose name I don’t remember—was supposed to give an answer to the American president over the phone. Judging by the newspaper, I guess he said no. I see why Mom calls him a lucky idiot.

I slide the strap off my shoulder to pull my purse closer and store the money. It’s rectangular, a bit small, and its black color is already fading. There’s a section perfect for coins. Mom said she used it when she was my age and that she couldn’t wait to pass it down to her ‘daughter.’ And indeed, she gave it to me. However, it’s practical: I can carry my phone, wallet, earnings, and there’s still room for a couple of small things.

Even though there aren’t many people yet, customers are guaranteed. The nearest café is several blocks away, and it’s an expensive place. My hot chocolate is pretty simple; whole milk, cocoa, and sugar. The bread is corn-based, similar to a bun but not as puffy, with a bit of cheese inside. It’s what I usually have for breakfast.

“Good morning, miss. May I see your permit to sell?” A deep voice pulls me from my thoughts. I turn to my right. Standing there, staring at me, is a police officer. “H-Hello, officer.” The way he stands so still is unsettling. “Y-Yes, sir.” I say as I search my purse and find the permit. I hand it to the officer, who moves stiffly to take it. “Are you Rebeca Phillips?” I could swear there was sarcasm in his dry voice. It’s a ridiculous question. Obviously, I’m not the adult in the photo.

“She’s my mother. I am… I’m Nadia Phillips.” It’s the second time I introduce myself to a stranger with that name, and I still feel a knot in my throat. “The law states that… there’s no issue in sharing a permit between direct family members.” I keep my voice low. The officer eyes me suspiciously for several seconds, the silence only broken by my breathing. “It’ll be fine this time,” he says, handing the permit back. “But next time, use your own. A youth permit. They’re not hard to get.” His tone remains unchanged.

“Since I’m here… I’ll take one.” From the way he says it, it sounds more like an order than a request. Out of nowhere, I find myself immediately serving him hot chocolate and bread. “Have a good day, young lady.” he says, leaving some bills before walking away. Once I see him get into the patrol car and drive off, I let out a deep sigh. “That was terrifying.” I say, not caring if someone hears me.

Years ago, a permit became required due to the saturation of street vendors. If you’re caught selling something not listed on the permit, there’s a fine. If you’re outside permitted hours, there’s a fine. If you’re in a ‘no vendor’ zone, there’s a fine. If you don’t have a permit, there’s jail time. Fortunately, I’m in the right place, at the right time, with the correct merchandise.

Mom renewed the permit she used in college so I could use it now. She also sold hot chocolate and bread back then. She advised me to set up here because wealthy people pass through and live there. Turning my head, I can see the three-story houses with large cars parked in their spacious garages.

Mom said that in her time, this area was full of empty lots, grasslands, and weeds. The few houses were only one story. Middle-class people lived here; brilliant people without brilliant jobs or salaries. With the crisis of the 90s, many emigrated to the United States.

Many never even made it to the coast. Many ended up homeless in Los Angeles, others with simple or low-paying jobs. Only a select few managed to find well-paid jobs earning juicy dollars.

They sent remittances to their families who had stayed behind in Maglavir. What they could save in a month over there was equivalent to a basic salary here. That’s how they managed to improve their lives; they renovated houses, built new ones, bought land, and indulged in other luxuries.

When the crisis passed, the wealthy began buying up the properties and improving them even more. Now, it’s this quiet and picturesque suburb.

"Hello. Give me three, please." says a man who appeared out of nowhere. He’s American. I can tell by his accent, his height, and the fact that he's wearing a shirt and shorts on such a cold morning. It’s not unusual to see them in this area; some are the ones who helped the migrants obtain the all-powerful American nationality.

I serve him what he asked for, and he pulls out a single bill from a large wallet. Wait a moment… this one is strange. It has only one digit, it’s beige with green, and… OH MY GOD. “Is this a dollar?” I CAN’T BELIEVE IT. “Yes, is that okay?” he asks, sounding surprised by my reaction.

“Sorry, it’s just impressive, but…” The last time I saw anything about currency exchange rates was in society class years ago. Back then, one dollar was worth 15 maygels. It’s not worth that anymore. Our currency has devalued but…

“I can go ask my cousin for maygels. He lives nearby.” says the American, still smiling, but now looking a bit embarrassed. “No, everything’s fine. Thank you for your purchase.” I quickly tuck the dollar into my bag. He nods and walks away, carefully balancing the bread on top of the cups.

If the maygel has devalued, that’s bad, very bad… if you only save in that currency. But if you have dollars, you can take advantage of that depreciation. The society teacher explained that many Americans vacation at the beaches here because their dollars go further.

A smile spreads across my lips as I look at the bill again. It has a man with a wig on one side, and from the ribbon underneath, I can guess his name is Washington. I could swear we were taught in class that that’s a place. On the other side, there’s a pyramid and an eagle. The word ‘one’ is everywhere.

Our bills have the texture of thin, smooth cardstock, and they also smell slightly like plastic. The dollar bill is stiffer, with a fibrous texture where the drawings and engravings are. I can’t quite place the smell, but it smells better.

TWO HOURS LATER — PAWN SHOP

“What do you mean only 30 maygels?!” I exclaim loudly, almost a scream, though luckily, it sounded very feminine. “The central bank releases different rates within the same week. The dollar can fluctuate between 30 and 50 maygels.” explains the pawnshop clerk calmly. He already made me feel bad for yelling.

He starts typing quickly on the computer at the counter, the keys clicking like heavy raindrops on the roof of an old car. He nods—he must have found something—then turns the bulky screen toward me.

“At this moment, one dollar is worth 40 maygels, but we charge a commission for each exchange.” The screen's brightness is too high, so I have to squint slightly. “If you have more of these bills, I can lower the commission.” he adds, turning the monitor back to himself.

The fu… “Fine.” I turn to check my earnings in my bag. The American came back a little while later, and I kept charging him a dollar for three orders of chocolate and bread. Again and again, until I sold out. I drank the last cup on my way here because of the cold and because I felt like I had made a great deal. But now, my rough and imprecise mental math is telling me this isn’t going to end well.

I take out two more-dollar bills and place them on the counter. I’ll keep just one. “For these, I can charge a commission of 5 maygels each.” he says while holding them under a bluish light for a moment before turning it off. “Patricia, take these to the safe.” he instructs a woman wearing a lot of makeup.

He types into the cash register, generating a receipt. He hands it to me along with 105 maygels. “Thank you, sir.” I say as I put the money away and step out of the shop.

Outside, the cold wind blows gently along the sidewalk and through the trees. For a moment, it almost sounds like laughter. As I walk toward the bus stop, I start counting how much money I actually made. My hopes sink when I realize how few bills I have; it’s only 185.

“DAN IT” I kick a can on the ground. My terrible soccer skills send it flying far away until it lands on a car windshield. The blue and white colors are unmistakable. OH NO. "IT'S THAT SAME TERRIFYING COP!" I don’t know why I said that out loud, but I do know that I need to start running and ignore his commands telling me to stop.


To Be Continued…

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